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DeaThrash (2)
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Sunday, March 21, 2010

creepy poem..

Current mood: restless

Views: 240
Comments: 5
a
sound.
the one i
always want
to hear. the dis-
turbingly beautiful
one that goes some-
thing like drip. drip. drip.
and then quiet. another
mutilation and maybe even 
a gasp because it hurts and
feels good, too. such a scary
thing, but what a relief. It's most
certainly a better feeling than the
one in my mind. but eventually, the
dripping ceases because from some
where deep inside me i can hear
myself say "dont make such a
damn mess, you already
are one."
11:23 pm - 5 comments - 6 Kudos - Report!
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jay gam wrote on Mar 22nd, 2010 8:51am

lovely

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DeaThrash wrote on Mar 22nd, 2010 5:46pm

wow, first off...that's a really epic shape =)
the wisdom words are really realistic..wow, they are really well put
the reader really gets into the whole situation, it's amazing
great piece Jerica ^^ love it

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Black Orchid wrote on Mar 23rd, 2010 2:28am

This one hit me pretty hard. Wicked poem.

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yessumpopa wrote on Mar 30th, 2010 10:40pm

thanks, you guys :]
i always love to hear what you have to say ^^
yeahhh, this one is intense..

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jazzmansax wrote on Aug 4th, 2010 6:03pm

ii like how you made it like a drop. heheheheh. i think i'll put up a poem on my profile too. nice job!

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