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DeaThrash (2)
Sunday, March 21, 2010

scripted poem..

Current mood: geeky

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If i were in charge of the world

i'd cancel broken hearts

my birthday,

asthma attacks and, also

most girls

if i were in charge of the world,

there'd be more cold places

more landscape, and

apparent seasons in sweaty Florida.

id i were in charge of the world,

you wouldn't have hurt

you wouldn't have regret

you wouldn't have to be grounded

or hear "Don't talk to me like that"

because you wouldn't even have parents.

if i were in charge of the world,

we wouldn't "all fall down"

ther would be no such thing as "inland"

and a person who sometimes loves often

and soemtimes fotgets to love

would still be allowed to be

in charge of the world.

11:12 pm - 6 comments - 2 Kudos - Report!
yessumpopa wrote on Mar 21st, 2010 11:21pm

this is a real poem,
can't remember the guy's name, though.
but i remade it and
the words in bold, if you can tell,
are mine.


DeaThrash wrote on Mar 21st, 2010 11:31pm

lol it's obvious what words are yours XD
exclusively yours XD lol
it's like ''trademark Jerica'' XD
well, in all seriousness, i really see where you're going here
and it's amazing ^^ i love it


yessumpopa wrote on Mar 22nd, 2010 12:00am

lol, thank you, dante.
i'm glad my words are apparent,
that's the aim..


Benadeto wrote on Mar 25th, 2010 2:35am

Oh danke danke! I'm pleased to see more poets. This is really good.


jazzmansax wrote on Aug 4th, 2010 6:04pm

you get negative kudos for cancelling your birthday! what in the hell is wrong with you! if you have no birthday your not alive you suicidal freak!
jk :)


tortilla wrote on Jan 14th, 2011 8:39am

if i were in charge of the world
i would do most of those things
but i wouldn't cancel my birthday
i like being the center of attention


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