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DeaThrash (2)
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Sunday, March 21, 2010

my favorite poem..

Current mood: curious

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Comments: 6

"I'm okay,"

she lied,

           and laughed

'till the pain was gone.

but,

            it lingers and she

hides

how bad

            it really hurts

who?

       after all,

would it help?

if she didn't bother to

hide sometimes...

        how she felt

even from those

                      who really care

to know?

but she

has someone that

                        they probably don't

have

even though she

wishes they did

                     and he helps her

get

through

it

all

becuase she knows

                           and don't we all?

    she can't do this by herself.

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DeaThrash wrote on Mar 21st, 2010 11:15pm

that's deep...
and really awesome =D
you're a great poet Jerica ^^
keep it up

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yessumpopa wrote on Mar 21st, 2010 11:23pm

aw, thank you, dante :]
that means alot.
this one is my favorite,
i don't know why..

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Benadeto wrote on Mar 24th, 2010 9:24am

Thats very clever. Do you like other stuff other than poetry? like philosophy?

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yessumpopa wrote on Mar 30th, 2010 10:43pm

thank yous :]
yeas, actually, i do.
i could have day and week long conversations
about philosphy and such things.
i can't get enough of those conversations.
they interst me alot.
i'd hear anyone's view point,
i don't know, i just love to talk about stuff like that.
:]

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Satch1032 wrote on May 8th, 2010 3:45pm

DeaThrash wrote on Mar 21st, 2010 at 4:15pm :
that's deep...
and really awesome =D
you're a great poet Jerica ^^
keep it up


Ditto. It is a great poem.

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jazzmansax wrote on Aug 4th, 2010 6:07pm

nice! thats really meaningful if i'm interpreting it right.

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