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kr46 (2)
Thursday, September 17, 2009

Crappy poem

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I march on slowly at a sluggish pace

Unaffected by the city’s race

Wondering

Pondering

About what could have been

What should have been

 

Chisels

Chipping away

Hollowing my heart

At every slightest sign

Of your smile, your style your hug your kiss

But the one thing that I most miss

Is being there for you when you cry

Being there when you just want to run and hide

 

What hurts most is the way

That we go on with our lives everyday

Like we never happened

That you’ll never see me the same way

And I’ll see you as the one that got away

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kr46 wrote on Sep 16th, 2009 4:43pm

Thats not bad ..I quite like it.There's feeling there and its structured..:)

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