SchmifftyFive wrote on Mar 18th, 2011 9:15pm
B isn't so flat:
I enjoyed this, and I'm shocked at how clear everything sounds. It's very tranquil, and i'm assumming that's the direction you're going with the piece. However, it seems like the song never quite goes anywhere. It starts, and ends, with alot of pleasant but indistinguishable pieces in the middle. I'd recommend a triangle structure for this song: have a Part A where you start, build up to a Part B that's a pit different in intensity, round off to a Part C which then mellows out into the original Part A. This is just an idea, and you certainly are more well-versed in soundscapes than I am. Good luck!