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Thursday, June 19, 2008

it was her

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here
She was that girl
that never left my mind
the girl that i dreamed of all the time
her beautiful smile
those
heart breaking eyes
the things that i always died 4
just looking at her face
would make me melt
just hearing her voice
would make me wanna yell for help
i couldn't say the words
wen right in front of her face
couldn't tell her how i felt
even though it would ache

 
cuz i hate the way she talks to me
i hate the way she stares at me
cause all those things
make me think
how much more i need to love her
cuz all of those things i've said and done
have gotten in the way of our love
and now i reallize how much more i need to love her 

now that its all said and done
she will be the one
looking at the sky
saying hellogoodbye
to the only one who loved her
and took her in his wings
lifted her and gave her a new life
and all those words i've said
have past through her heart like
a bullet in glass, 
which would shatter my heart 
but hers would never regret the past
 
cuz i hate the way she talks to me
i hate the way she stares at me
cause all those things
make me think
how much more i need to love her
cuz all of those things i've said and done
have gotten in the way of our love
and now i reallize how much more i need to love her
 

cause she always calls me
she always tells me
that the only way to love
is to twist your heart into a glove
and let it all go

 
 
 


8:31 am - 7 comments - 3 Kudos - Report!
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aaron6890 wrote on Jun 19th, 2008 8:47pm

ok this is much better than the other one, its so simple its great, i cant write simple.

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guitaristsasha wrote on Jun 24th, 2008 5:41pm

Wow i wish i could write something that good. This one's my favorite.

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AmyRayFan wrote on Jun 30th, 2008 6:53pm

this is my favorite..its cute :D good job!

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AndyRevenge wrote on Jul 16th, 2008 12:11am

well done my friend

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omgitsPaRaMoRe! wrote on Aug 9th, 2008 4:04pm

Awww...I love it! ♥

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kirkhammet69 wrote on Aug 23rd, 2008 1:36am

yea all these songs rok!!!!

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UGGurl18 wrote on Aug 25th, 2008 9:43pm

awe :) good job. really cute. J'aime it :)

Just by reading it, i know where you're at; rhythm wise. can just hear the song play in my head.

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