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Thursday, June 19, 2008

we'll make it through

Current mood: touched

Views: 274
Comments: 6
Never give up
Never give in
No one can stop you from dreamin
You make your own choices
You do what you want
Just never give up
and Keep on believin

Just keep followin your heart
Cuz it will help u through the dark
Just make sure you can trust
and ignore all that dust
 
yeah

Chorus
Cuz losin u'r hopes
Is like losing your dreams
You might never get through
The challenges and needs


Your dreams can come true
As long as you try
You can make it through 
just fight till you die
 
and now that its all lost
pick yourselve up
and do wat ever it costs
to make it all up

 
cause we're all we got
even though love and hate will take you back
just be yourselve and punch the bag
till all your doubts had fallen down

 
here we go now
 
Cuz losin u'r hopes
Is like losing your dreams

You might never get through
The challenges and needs

Your dreams can come true
As long as you try
You can make it through
You'll make it 'til the end
 
repeats chorus
 
we'll make it through
yeah

 
5:36 pm - 6 comments - 4 Kudos - Report!
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aaron6890 wrote on Jun 19th, 2008 8:24pm

its good, only think i can really critique you on is the fact that some of the ideas are alittle cliche. and alittle optimistic, but theres nothing wrong with that. also hate to say it, but it reminded me of two songs, never gonna give you up, and dont stop believin sorry man, but the songs is good, just some thoughts.

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oh poe poe wrote on Jun 24th, 2008 3:16am

^hes got a point there =p i pretty much agree with everything he said its not bad though

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guitaristsasha wrote on Jun 24th, 2008 5:39pm

I like it =]

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guitaristsasha wrote on Jun 24th, 2008 5:39pm

I like it =]

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AndyRevenge wrote on Jul 16th, 2008 12:12am

sweet man. this sounds like it could really melodic with a few guitars jaming away

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paramore=bdt wrote on Jul 18th, 2008 2:29am

it's really good. anyways, you shouldn't worry about what other people say if they say something bad. >rofchikns!<

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