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Thursday, March 06, 2008

My new poem (kim u may know it!) "Your not Alone"

Current mood: creative

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Your not alone

One lonely heart

Left outside in the cold

Trying to find a way

To reshape her mold

One abusing parent

Not caring what others think

Taking their anger out on others

To satisfy their needs

One abused child

Trying to find a way out

Running, screaming, panting,

To find the benefit of the doubt

Are you one of these people

Chasing but falling behind

To a place where there’s happiness

A place you know you’ll never find

You’re not alone

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schroeder215 wrote on Mar 18th, 2008 12:26am

wow....thats good
it makes you think.....*thinking*

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Iheartnirvana wrote on Mar 22nd, 2008 3:06pm

*thinking with travis* hmm

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TreyJ wrote on Mar 28th, 2008 3:55am

thinking with travis and tom.... *head explodes*
no it is very profound, if i do say myself, a very exquisite piece of work, it is of the sesquepideallian thought, adn i have no idea what i am talking about, nice though

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phatkid911a wrote on Mar 29th, 2008 2:55am

ok...

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SilentFairytale wrote on May 28th, 2008 1:02pm

Yana i take that as a put down! why would i knoiw that?! grrrrrrrrrrrrrr *never speaking to you again* hehe! idk... :)

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