monwobobboa wrote on Apr 18th, 2010 1:13am reelbigfish2020 wrote on Apr 16th, 2010 at 6:25pm :
i dont like the fact that the bass is panned to one side. i like the jazzy feel to the song. the guitar sounds weak. guitar work around 1:30 sounds outta key. with some buffing up this could be a pretty sweet track. coming in at 2:12 on guitar was sweet. 2:40 started losing it trying to put too much in. a little loose, but good potential. love the bass drum on the main riff and the tambourine or w/e thats somewhere in the middle and at the end. |
thanx for some reason when i converted tohe song to an mp3 the guitar and bass ended up panned on one side. guess i should fix that.
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reelbigfish2020 wrote on Apr 17th, 2010 12:25am i dont like the fact that the bass is panned to one side. i like the jazzy feel to the song. the guitar sounds weak. guitar work around 1:30 sounds outta key. with some buffing up this could be a pretty sweet track. coming in at 2:12 on guitar was sweet. 2:40 started losing it trying to put too much in. a little loose, but good potential. love the bass drum on the main riff and the tambourine or w/e thats somewhere in the middle and at the end. quote |
Mr.Oliver wrote on Apr 4th, 2010 5:02am I like the whole feel of the song, very groovy! Keep it up! quote |
GuyWithOneEye wrote on Jan 10th, 2010 8:22pm Ok song. It started out nice but I just got kinda bored with it after a while. The soloing sounds out of key with the bass often. I think it has potential, mainly you just need to work on soloing and staying in key. quote |
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ankthebank wrote on Aug 3rd, 2009 2:44pm Really like the effects used at the start, and then the riff used later on.
Good backing from drums and bass, nice and rock solid.
Like how the melody always eventually comes back to the main riff, like a little hook.
Solo is really unique, suits the song really well... and is the outstanding feature for me. quote |
jmako wrote on Jul 27th, 2009 3:58pm this is a good mix. idk if you used a drum program or what but either way i like the drum line you composed. my only critique would be to work on your soloing some. i dont know if it was improv or if you wrote this whole song out but i just felt that in a couple spots your solo was a little dull. its by no means awful and if it fits your personal taste i wouldnt go tweaking it because overall this is a good song. quote |
Defnition wrote on Jul 26th, 2009 3:16am Life force had a very nice groove, very bouncy. The tones were great and it all sounded great. Project Z, very nice intro and groove again. The bassline was great and the leads sounded pretty good. It all came together very well, great work! quote |
kasso99 wrote on Jul 25th, 2009 5:55am nice creative stuff here. i like your basslines and leadwork on lifeforce. your drum program makes your playing sound less impressive than it is though... too synthesized. keep up with your production efforts; your mix is surprisingly clear and well balanced.  quote |
scottymoe wrote on Jul 24th, 2009 11:18pm your lead work is really cool, dude! guitar tone sounds great! quote |