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Saturday, July 24, 2010

Poem

Current mood: annoyed

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Comments: 6
This was originally supposed to be a song but I couldn't find the right chords for it so I just made it in to a poem

I suck at poems, but I love to read them

and I haven't written a blog in a while

Love that I while new acquire 

Your eyes, your lips, your face, your touch
It's the only feeling that I can't get enough
The way you walk, the way you smile
You make me glance back and stare for a while
You are the dream in my mind that never goes away
I spend my life think about you, and I am amazed

Amazed that I can never have you
Amazed that I will never kiss you
My love will always stay true
Because my life is nothing without you

We are complete opposites, which I cannot bare
That you will never love me and so I dare
That my love will go wasted, and this I swear
But I will never give up because I care

You are my passion, you are my love
You are the gift they sent from above

I changed to obtain your love
Every night I lay and sob
For i know everything I do
Will mean absolutely nothing to you

And now I know the truth 
That someone has been going out with you
Instead of me, you choose him
And now my life is so grim

4:05 am - 6 comments - 4 Kudos - Report!
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Ic3 wrote on Jul 24th, 2010 1:43pm

a really sad poem but really beautifuly whriten .

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metalkamikazeea wrote on Jul 24th, 2010 3:09pm

Ic3 wrote on Jul 24th, 2010 at 7:43am :
a really sad poem but really beautifuly whriten .

Thanks

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xanzan wrote on Jul 24th, 2010 3:12pm

oh my... i cant really say anything else!! this is really good!

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AJSaw wrote on Jul 26th, 2010 10:22pm

wow...that just described my situation...eerily well...maybe make it into a "Avenged Sevenfold" type song...it might work that way

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metalkamikazeea wrote on Jul 27th, 2010 12:25am

AJSaw wrote on Jul 26th, 2010 at 4:22pm :
wow...that just described my situation...eerily well...maybe make it into a "Avenged Sevenfold" type song...it might work that way


all I need now is a guitarist that can sweep pick like synester gates

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clorre wrote on Jul 28th, 2010 12:06pm

Love it!!

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