The Also-ran (first poem i've made that i've liked

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mastaofrocknrol (1)
Cal UK (2)

Wednesday, January 14, 2009

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Hey stupid title, not that i've liked, first that i've liked IN A WHILE

Also-ran

The Also-ran went down without any show
shod legs buckled shedding rider and crop.
The turf absorbed the thunder-clump.
At that speed, to stop scars rump
and everything riding on it

They think the carpus pierced the throat,
the radius the lung. It undulates, the skin on its flank -
A last little ripple like the flags on the course before,
with mad eyes staring,
the wind dies and the standards swoon with excitement.
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mastaofrocknrol wrote on Jun 30th, 2009 11:40am

Hmmmmm not bad at al.
Reminds of the good old Dada Poems from poets like Schitters and Tzara.

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mastaofrocknrol wrote on Jun 30th, 2009 11:41am

^I meant Schwitters BTW, not Schitters.

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Cal UK wrote on Nov 14th, 2009 3:42pm

Nice one mate.

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