Steps Through Time (Demo) Comments (9)

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imposiitin wrote on Feb 12th, 2011 12:00pm

Mmm.. I like this! It has really relaxing feel. I like the treble high on the guitars as it bring its own bit to the feel of the song. It's little repetive but it sounds like there might be a vocal line added later? Keep up the good work!

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andreabilluni wrote on Feb 11th, 2011 11:31pm

As AeolianInvasion stated before it this sounds a bit repetitive. If you would add vocals this would be propably fixed :) but even without them I still enjoyed this.
Keep up the good work!

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VforFailure wrote on Feb 11th, 2011 2:01pm

it's a really good mellow song, sounds kind of like something I would hear at the end of a skate video or something, it's very well done, though I would love to hear some vocals on the track. As far as the tone goes the treble might be a bit high on the guitar, but at the same time I feel that it actually adds to the track, so not sure if it's a bad thing.

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marrs11a wrote on Feb 11th, 2011 5:32am

triggerhappy19 wrote on Feb 11th, 2011 at 12:26am :
Very good sonic quality! The only thing I would change about the tone is a little less tinnyness and high end on the acoustic guitar. Also, ride sounds a little distant. The chord progression and playing is quite good.


Ahhh, thank you thank you for pointing something out to improve. haha! Yes, now that you mention it, the hat could move up a bit, and I think I know what you mean on the guitars, might possibly clean up the picking noises a bit even. Thanks a lot man!

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triggerhappy19 wrote on Feb 11th, 2011 5:26am

Very good sonic quality! The only thing I would change about the tone is a little less tinnyness and high end on the acoustic guitar. Also, ride sounds a little distant. The chord progression and playing is quite good.

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marrs11a wrote on Feb 11th, 2011 5:04am

AeolianInvasion wrote on Feb 11th, 2011 at 12:00am :
Thanks for critiquing my music. The sound is good and very professional. Obviously you've got your technique down.

Are you eventually going to add vocals to this? As great as this sounds, it feels incomplete and a bit repetitive without something on top of it to keep things interesting. Hope this helps.

Aeolian Invasion


As a matter of fact, I have every intention of adding to this. Not sure when I will have the chance, but have a glance at my track info in my "all mp3's" tab. Thanks for the feedback man. Really appreciate it

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AeolianInvasion wrote on Feb 11th, 2011 5:00am

Thanks for critiquing my music. The sound is good and very professional. Obviously you've got your technique down.

Are you eventually going to add vocals to this? As great as this sounds, it feels incomplete and a bit repetitive without something on top of it to keep things interesting. Hope this helps.

Aeolian Invasion

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BrickIsRed wrote on Feb 10th, 2011 4:05pm

Nice rhythm my brother.

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fendercopyuser wrote on Feb 8th, 2011 9:21pm

me likes.

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