Well, I've decided on the names, Cygnus is the main character, Haze is the girl that kills herself and whatnot, and Squall is the "bad guy."
Cygnus will confront Squall when he hears the news about Haze, and will lose their fight, vowing revenge and whatnot.
After Cygnus' revenge plan is carried out, Squall comes to him for help, thinking he's going crazy. Cygnus realizes he's a monster and whatnot now, and Squall dies in his care.
I'm still not sure how it's gonna end, either with the above bullet, or he determines to make things right and does that somehow
I've been listening to a lot of Coheed lately, and decided the world would be better if I write a concept album. The names and ending arent set in stone, and will most likely be changed. Anyway, here's my idea:
Apollo's friend, Lady, kills herself because she found out her lover didn't love her. Apollo, who thought of Lady as his sister, is enraged. He confronts her "boyfriend," Max, and is amazed at how much he doesn't care. Angry, he swears he will avenge his friend. So, Apollo begins working on an elaborate plot to make Max realize what his carelessness has caused. He carries out his plan, and Max goes insane/dies for some reason. Standing over the body of his enemy, Apollo realizes that his rage turned him into a monster. In order to set his life straight, and to avoid being traced back to the death of Max, Apollo leaves his small town to...
That's all I have...if you have suggestions or stuff, or realized that I subconsciously stole this idea from something, let me know, I would appreciate it.