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Sunday, July 24, 2011

Another Poem

Current mood: confused

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This is poem i wrote last night after listening to Jimi Hendrix for two hours. comments would be appreciated, but be brutally honest
 
The Eyes
 
The Psycho is hiding
The room is dark
You don't know where to go
The eyes are watching
 
The clown is outside
The room is bright
You don't know how to laugh
The eyes are watching
 
The angel is on the roof
The room is shaking
You don't know how to pray
The eyes are watching
 
The junkie is in the kitchen
The room is empty
You don't know how to sleep
The eyes are watching
 
The nerd is at the door
The room is annoyed
You don't know how to talk
The eyes are watching
 
The ghost is in the wall
The room is quiet
You don't know how to scream
The eyes are smiling
 
3:16 pm - 3 comments - 1 Kudos - Report!
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Breanna Speaks wrote on Jul 27th, 2011 9:05pm

Pretty awsome.

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guitargrl1013 wrote on Jul 28th, 2011 7:33pm

thats pretty cool!!

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IHEARTTOMKAULIT wrote on Aug 25th, 2011 7:13pm

omg that was awsome o love this one

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