Artemis Entreri wrote on Oct 31st, 2012 5:42am
Not bad. I like the space, it's not crammed with hundreds of notes as people are so prone. Your lead lines feel a little shaky. Some are rushed, some are a little too far behind the beat. A lot of the notes you rest on are slightly out of tune.
However, I think it's a good composition, interesting changes with an appropriate lead line. If you sharpened it up it could be a really slick track.