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Thursday, July 09, 2009

Humble

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This is just an exercise I did; for some reason, I seem to force myself to rhyme in my writing, even when it hurts the piece. So, I decided to relax a little, and try writing without rhymes. Let me know what you think.
 
I have never cared for pampering; it'll be the end of society.
I've never been a fan of gluttons; stuff your face just to take.
The selfish are a downfall; just blackholes never to be filled.
Be content with what you have; you probably don't deserve it.
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Insomniac35 wrote on Jul 15th, 2009 7:37pm

That sounds philosophical as fuck bro!
Good though.

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aimeewhite wrote on Nov 14th, 2009 1:01am

wow!!!! That was GREAT i loved it!!!! :)

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