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Wednesday, January 06, 2010

a poem i wrote for world studies

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Let’s Crash The Masquerade


We are born to a shell that’s molested.

While naked pupils of innocence uplift,

They detest that organic aura,

Striving to mold and deform the soul

With society’s pedestal of suffocation,

These man-made poisons of ego

 And furious persuasion. Infants aren’t born corrupt.


How fragile, the anatomy of a changeling.

With our mindsets fated as clay from the start

And our ways restricted to this map,

No  one sees  how we bask in evil’s glory.

We must open our eyes and remove these dark masks.


Choice-less education hammers barbarian traditions

And the cage is too censored to explore

The slaughter of the innocent, an unnecessary war

 Scorning humanity. Can an “advanced” society

Find resolution without violence?


While technology feasts off decadent minds

Glitter and robotics shame these gifts of nature


Rape victims become puppets when placed in cubicles.

Marionettes with their briefcases, their wounded wrists

 Blister beneath the shackles.


Our tampered species has evolved with hateful forked tongues,

Minds shunned to the wonder of a child, we cannot reflect

 past simplicities. Hypocrites say nature is a sin ,

Yet it is “holy” to brainwash, to preach ignorance and greed?


Imagine us at the beginning.

How could we have changed so much?

Was our need for self satisfaction our downfall?

What we need is  a cleansing, universal epiphany

 that science forbids, for its blind clones

might then learn something.


We must venture for mindfulness, ward off the ordinary

And break free,  Peek beneath the masks,

Find a piece of the wreckage and warp it with your name.

Liberate yourself from normality. Embrace this life

 And live to illustrate your story.

2:27 pm - 4 comments - 8 Kudos - Report!
ripdime04 wrote on Jan 6th, 2010 8:41pm

ii fucking love it. i like the dark and shows the hates of mankind. it was awesome


edsguitar wrote on Jan 18th, 2010 1:35pm

That is some powerful stuff! +10 nice!


Sickhick wrote on Jan 26th, 2010 9:38am



2006 wrote on Mar 21st, 2010 5:36am

i like it :)


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