Pretty... but long-winded wif shaky voice and all... sounded like you needed a bit of Sade on the vocals. Try bring the piano and bass in with the guitar. There is something needed in the bottom to move it along. My songs have no bass which gets to me sometimes, but yeah... this definitely needs a groove beneath it. And a piano noodle is needed...

but nicely done regardless

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Venice King wrote on Jun 27th, 2010 at 12:00am : This is be far my favourite song you've ever even done. I like the piano bit tooo. What happened to the long bass solo i was expectin4

Hey man, thanks a lot!

Yeah the piano bit was kind of what the song grew from. I was messing around with a few ideas and it all went from there.

Ha, I was going to record a bass line with my fretless-acoustic, but I decided it probably would sound more organic if I kept it simple. Plus it made me feel better that I didn't have to do any multitracking

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This is be far my favourite song you've ever even done. I like the piano bit tooo. What happened to the long bass solo i was expectin4

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