ethan_hanus wrote on Jul 6th, 2011 4:25pm
Not half bad, kept me entertained. Much better than the last song of yours I critted. Nice dynamics and build ups. That clean part was kinda just random, and a bit out of tune, but the rest of the song meshed pretty well. I think your guitar is slightly out of intonation though.
When you go into that clean part, try and build down into it, and not just throw it in there randomly, and then build up from it, prolly make it longer and give yourself more time to transition into the change.
Otherwise, pretty good dude. Thanks for the crit.