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Metal Axe (1)
Thursday, January 28, 2010

Numbing the senses

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Numbing The Senses, a teen angst song. 

With all the loads of bullshit
They teach us in these schools
It's a wonder we don't scream it
"Fuck you and all your rules"
So instead we sit in class
Just abiding all the lies
The numbing of our senses
And counting down the time

Then when we get home
They try to numb us with TV
Cliched loads of crap
And girls without their T's
Well I have had enough
Nice though that may be
So the only one I trust
Is me and only me

And every now and then
I feel the numbing of my mind
And to be completely honest
It feels rather nice
Cuz, who needs to kill your pain
When there is an easy way
Numbing your own senses
Numbing your own brain

I'm kicking around a 4th verse/stanza right now, so this is the nearly finished. I think it needs a little cleaning up, mostly in the 3rd verse, but it's decent. I'm working on a little joke song too and I'm hoping to have it finished by next week.
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Metal Axe wrote on Jan 28th, 2010 3:00am

:golfclap: Looking good so far. I'm not good with lyrical advice but I'm looking foward to seeing what else you come up with.


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