That Man in the Mirror
It was a dreary friday night back in 1999
You thought it would be nice to go for a drive
So you went to a bar down around 18th and Vine
You and a few friends were having a great time
But then some jerk came up to try to ruin it all
He wasn't any fun he ran around, he drank and he bawled
So when you were pushed the edge couldn't take him much more
You whipped out a knife and started a fight
That was the first time that you took a life
And even though they never found you
After all these lonley years
You're in a cell that's drowned you
With all your lonley tears
And it doesn't matter what you think
If you're wrong or if you're right
You still can't stand that man in the mirror
You couldn't stand it much longer the guilt would eat you alive
You felt you'd either tell somebody or you'd die
But you decided to tell your lovely young wife
Who couldn't keep a secret if it depended on her life
And when she told her best friend that was the end of it all
And even though the guilt would haunt the rest of your knife
There were two more blood stains on the end of your knife
And even though they've never found you
After all these long long years
You're in a cell that's drowned you
In all your lonely tears
And it doesn't matter what your thinking
Were you wrong or were you right
Because still you can't stand seeing
That ugly man in the mirror
I have no idea where I got the idea for the song I just woke up and I had the chorus in my head and I knew it was about a man who killed some one. The third verse is a work in progress but I hope that will be posted by the end of the day. Any (constructive) criticisms? I'm not a fan of how there was no build up to him killing the first guy, well there was but there wasn't much. Of course there isn't build up to many bar fights, they just happen. Anyways on to the first song I ever wrote. Like I said before I posted this in the Song Writing forum and forgot about it. It's a slow 12 bar blues.
Do You Gotta Leave
Do you gotta leave tonight girl
Can't you stay just one more day
Say you gotta leave tonight girl
Can't you stay just one more day
If you gotta leave tonight girl
It'll be mind that's going away
It's been so long since I seen my baby
Wonder where she might be
Been oh so long since I seen my lady
Wonder where she could be
I've got a bad bad feeling
My little girl is leaving me
Heard my baby early this morning
Say she was movin' out
Finally heard my little girl this morning
She say she's movin' out
She got an aparment so far away
She can't hear me shout
Tried to talk to her this morning
Tried to get her back
I tried to talk her this morning
Just tryin' to get her back
She gave the phone to her new man
And that was the end of that
Believe it or not this song was inspired by my dog. She was laying on my bed and when she got up to leave for something the "Do you gotta leave tonight girl" came to me and it evolved from there. I think that one is finished but any criticisms are welcome, keep in mind my sense of grammar disappears when I sing the blues and I just typed it how I sang it.