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-AnTRaX- (2)
metalkamikazee (2)
Friday, October 08, 2010

what do u think? :)

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What do u think? :)

say how?
you can sleep at night
when i cry
for something you did, with a smile
you destroid, my life and walket away
with your head
 held high.
please tell me how?

please tell me what?
you feel when you se
the man in the mirror
smiling that fake smile and
looking into. your eyes
it cant be pride?

i made it just on the rush hehe..so if its not so good fogive me :) and its really not done and it sounds alot better with a melody :)
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-AnTRaX- wrote on Oct 8th, 2010 10:44pm

seems to be fairly good this far indeed, but still needs to be improved in some parts, im sure if you get some time to work on it, it will become a lot better :D

=p

yaay :D

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metalkamikazee wrote on Oct 8th, 2010 10:45pm

you're way better than me
a few spelling errors though

good job, i like it

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clorrea wrote on Oct 9th, 2010 11:05am

haha yeah i know xP im gonna work on it alot tonight

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