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Thursday, May 26, 2011

my first song. written in april 2009.

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Power CHORDS...E, D, C for verses and sencond chorus. for first chorus is standard chords...E,D,C. its my easiest song. bridge is pure picking.

Verse 1:
My veins burst as you walk away
mind full of thoughts...nothing to say.
walls between us, skies of gray.
this poison killing me day by day

Pre chorus:
and i'm just here to say...

Loneliness is what i feel, sitting here alone (a little humming part)
Loneliness is what i feel, sitting here alone..and am waiting.
Loneliness is what i feel, sitting here alone...and am waitin for u.
Loneliness is what i feel, sitting here alone...I've been waiting for u

Verse 2:
Your words are like rods through my heart
holding on to this as the end slowly frays.
On this lonely bed for long hours i lay.
i fall to my knees...but cant pray.
you say the truth, but they're all lies.
can somebody please hear my cries...hear my cries...PLEASE hear my cries!

Chorus 2:
loneliness is what i feel sitting here...and am waitig for you
Only for you my love.

There's one thing i'd sell my soul for...
and thats to hear u say..

Our lives dont have to end in tragedy
I have you...and you have me.
I love you...and you love me.

i knw it aint all that good. but it was my first song. cut some slack.haha.

4:42 pm - 3 comments - 3 Kudos - Report!
hotstuff90 wrote on May 26th, 2011 10:21pm

thats sweet :)


buzz1a wrote on May 26th, 2011 11:54pm

u like it? :)


beaurepairs97 wrote on Jun 14th, 2011 4:19am

thats not bad man i like it :)


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