6505 Improv Comments (2)

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timi_hendrix wrote on Jan 12th, 2008 7:29pm

tone is a bit mushy. not that clear. nice playing, though some of the bends were a bit off and the chromatic notes fell in the wrong places sometimes. The fast phrases could do with a little work, it sounded like you were trying to play a bit above yourself but it's got lots of potential.

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GuitarJunkie wrote on Dec 19th, 2007 10:22pm

I like how you aren't rushing the solo, there are some fast parts but they fit in well. There is something that doesn't sound right though. Some of the lead parts don't seem to mesh well (the faster parts aren't sloppy, but they could be a little "crisper" for lack of a better term I guess. Someone once told me that there is no such thing as playing a wrong note in a lead part as long as you can play notes around it that compliment that riff. I think thats what this piece needs.

I got a few songs in my profile too. Happy to give more crit. for crit.

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