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Friday, May 28, 2010

"untitled poem" (comment please, let me know what

Current mood: lethargic

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Comments: 4
The biggest risk a heart can take,
A second chance, it’s there to make.
Turned into three, there can’t be four,
Im gone from your life, if it turns more.

I can’t rule your life for you,
The choice is yours, with what to do.
Though if it comes, please spare me this,
Your love for me cannot exist.

Inside I have, but nothing left,
In times of love, it feels like death.
It’s taken more than I first knew,
I had to give, my strength it’s through.

I’m only human,
Don’t treat me like I’m just a toy.
I hope from now, you’ll think of me,
Through distance, love, brutality.

One life we lead, to walk this land,
At times it’s hard, at times it’s grand.
Mistakes we’ll make, through them we grow,
It’s far too hard to see you go.

If you do care, then I believe,
We’ll make it through, this time to grieve.
And out the other side we’ll go,
Through, thick, through thin, through rain through snow.

The future comes, the past, forgot,
Dishonesty, it starts to rot.
No lies be told, we start as new,
From you to me, from me to you.

One year, it’s down, though not through ease,
one more, we can, we must, I plead.
Please keep these thoughts so you can see,
How much in life, you mean to me.
5:42 am - 4 comments - 4 Kudos - Report!
Fear2Touch wrote on May 28th, 2010 1:41pm

thats really good. love it


metalkamikazee wrote on May 28th, 2010 11:06pm

awesome poem
You've got a lot of talent


Riff Driven wrote on May 29th, 2010 3:23am

Very nice poem, seems really personal.


Dr.Blues wrote on May 30th, 2010 7:12pm



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