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Saturday, June 05, 2010

Right Before I'm Wrong

Current mood: mellow

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My latest original song and only second song ive ever written to date.  Should have started doing this years ago, been learning a lot just writing and listening to what ive written. 

Song is called Right Before I'm Wrong

Lyrics:

Pain is all I know
Apologies don't mean a thing
Say your sorry don't lie to me
I'm free from you that's all I need
Loving you ain't the same
Please just stop the pain

Too pressure in my head
I just cant escape.
Gettin it right before i'm wrong
I ain't gettin another chance.

Drag me down, pump me up
Full of drugs, I don't wanna love.
Hide the lies pain builds inside
It all crashes down on you.
Loving you ain't the same
Please just stop the pain

Too pressure in my head
I just cant escape.
Gettin it right before i'm wrong
I ain't gettin another chance.

Now i'm dead, my bloods on you
the devil caught you cryin.
Call the doc before i'm dead
baby i'm really dying.
Loving you ain't the same
Please just stop the pain.

Too pressure in my head
I just cant escape.
Gettin it right before i'm wrong
I ain't gettin another chance.
Too pressure in my head
I just cant escape.
Gettin it right before i'm wrong
I ain't gettin another chance.


Song was heavily inspired by the shit I went through with an ex-girlfriend.  She lied, cheated, stole, and became a heroin addict. Recently tried to apologize for everything she put me through and get back with me.  Told that bitch to hit the road and have a nice life, the year of hell she put me through i'll never forget.  Learned from my mistakes and hers, this is the outcome.  I relatively happy with it.

Drums are MIDI, still my weak point as far as composition.  MIDI violin laying down a layer in the background of the song.  Guitar part just came out of messing around a bit, nothing complicated.  Vocals still my strongest point.

Let me know what you guys think of this song.  Hope you enjoy it.

NOTE:  Just received confirmation today this will be playing on UGRadio havn't heard it yet but will keep and ear out for it.
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