My horrible attempt at improve. I'm using my Artcore for this one, on clean with no distortion. I'm using my amps effects to produce the Rotary Spiker, Reverb, and Echo. Anyways, this is actually more or less the interlude to a much larger song/ballad
Well, I decided to COMPLETLY overhaul this song. It's more upbeat now. But I'm not sure if it'll fit the lyrics, this might turn out to be "February" instead
Okay, so I'm using my Fender Starcaster for the entire recording. I'm playing my Metal Muff with Top Boost through my Peavey amp. I'm actually quite proud of this song, as it's probably the most professional sounding song I've made to date. Anyways, the bass guitar is actually only my Starcaster but digitally lowered an octave
Verse-
Don't shed a tear my friend
Come into my open arms
I've got an ear to lend
You won't have to wait for long
Think of us what you will
But what does that mean to you?
If you knew you couldn't fail
What's the first thing you'd do?
Chorus-
Tick tock tick tock
Well before the clocks drop
Tick tock tick tock
I wanna make time stop
Tick tock tick tock
Well before the bombs drop
Tick tock tick tock
I wanna make time stop for you
Verse-
A arms embrace on a summers day
This feeling of comfort was worth the wait
To see your face so full of life
To feel your soft skin brushing mine
Warm summers day an even warmer embrace
Not even true love can make me feel this way
Lush, you make me feel like a kid again
I hope to God you feel the same
(Chorus)
Verse-
White tank top and faded jeans
We just sit and talk
Wonder about those trivial things
And how we can't reverse the clock