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Saphira551 (1)
Wednesday, April 22, 2009

When Darkness Falls (UPON YOU) Crit please?

Current mood: depressed

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Also, after my testing today, I took out a peice of paper, thought long and hard about what you guys said to me.. and this came out. :O
It's not perfect, but I really don't care

It's written from two sides of me, the suicidal side and the side that is trying.
When I was done and read it, It made me feel so much better. If it does the same for you, then my work is done.

When Darkness Falls

What will you do; what can you do
When all the little lies come true
Perhaps you'll find you're dead inside
You'll search yourself; try to find
All the little ties that [BIND YOU]
To your own made up reality,
But it's all just lies; why can you see
That all your lies are killing me

How come when you look into my eyes
You suddenly get paralyzed?
Don't be afraid of what I am,
It's all part of some twisted plan
A plan designed to [TEST YOU]
To find out how strong you truly are,
To try to shake you, try to BREAK you.
You can't turn back, you've come to dar
Don't ever forget who you are

Nowhere to run, Nowhere to hide
Sure you think you're dead inside
But suicides the BITCH way out
It goes against what you're all about
You're life may sting; You're life may suck
But there MANY people with much worse luck
So next time When Darkness Falls [UPON YOU]
Just remember my words, remember your friends',
And don't stop fightin' 'till the End!
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Saphira551 wrote on Apr 24th, 2009 8:02pm

Moo, that was really good. :] In so many ways I can relate to that, and I'm sure I don't stand on that alone. It makes a lot of sense, I think you really should consider writing music to it. :]

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08L1V10N wrote on May 15th, 2009 10:40am

WHEN DARKNESS FAAAALS WE ARE REBORN!

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