This is the first draft of a poem I've written for my English class. I'm looking for some opinions. Enjoy! ^.^
Just one chance is all I ask,
One chance to prove how I feel
To carry these feelings is an arduous task
What more must I do to show you it’s real?
We kiss and we hug, but where is the meaning?
Elation without purpose is hollow
I try to get closer but it feels like I’m weaning
Still beating, my heart I will follow