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Monday, May 24, 2010

One Chance (First Draft)

Current mood: bored

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This is the first draft of a poem I've written for my English class. I'm looking for some opinions. Enjoy! ^.^

One Chance

 

Just one chance is all I ask,

One chance to prove how I feel

 

To carry these feelings is an arduous task

What more must I do to show you it’s real?

 

We kiss and we hug, but where is the meaning?

Elation without purpose is hollow

 

I try to get closer but it feels like I’m weaning

Still beating, my heart I will follow

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Saint Valentinea wrote on Jun 7th, 2010 4:27am

I turned it in and got an A-

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