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Monday, April 20, 2015

Clutter, Length, Blood, Cable, Mind.

Current mood: thoughtful

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Just some poetry I wrote a while ago. It doesn't reflect as much as it used to but I think I'm a little proud of it.


Clutter

give me a cigarette
you can't have one

give me a drink
you can't have one
give me a viper
you can't have one
give me a needle
you can't have one
give me a pill
you can't have one
give me my vices
you don't need them

Length

give me her gaze
you won't get it
give me her lips
you won't get it
give me her body
you won't get it
give me her hand
you won't get it
give me her blood
you won't get it
give me my love
she'll never see it

Blood

take this food
I don't want it
take this bed
I don't want it
take this water
I don't want it
take this oxygen
I don't want it
take this lifeline
I don't want it
take your existence
I don't deserve it

Cables

give me a knife 
you won't take it
give me poison
you won't use it
give me a gun
you won't hold it
give me a rope
you can't tie it
give me a cancer
you'll survive it
But I deserve it
no-one gets what they deserve

Mind

Give me my vices
They'll kill you
give me my love
she'll taint you
take your existence
Give it away
bring me my death
because I deserve it
the things I've done
only redouble this
You'll get it when we say
because you don't deserve freedom


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mind_meld wrote on Apr 20th, 2015 7:14pm

Wow that's really good!!

If you don't mind me asking, was this from your 'dark mood' earlier this year, or from another time?

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Pastafarian96a wrote on Apr 20th, 2015 9:07pm

the dark mood, Actually I wrote it either a week ago or 4 weeks ago, it was a monday, because I remember where I was, but not which week it was.

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Harvey Swick wrote on Apr 26th, 2015 9:03am

:y:

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SingingStrings7 wrote on May 5th, 2015 8:40pm

Awesome

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thief_of_fire wrote on Jun 9th, 2015 9:46pm

Wonderful writing man. Very striking and good use of repetition.

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Harvey Swick wrote on Apr 12th, 2016 7:39pm

I think it's a poem

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