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BloodCold wrote on Jan 15th, 2011 6:43pm

PCADriven wrote on Jan 3rd, 2011 at 10:51am :
I was just bored and going through some of the comments on my peices and I noticed that you often critisced my rhyming lol :P

That's cuz your rhyming reminds me of my previous pieces... the first ones i ever wrote and they were a mess of feelings holding together solely due to the rhymes Everyone of my friends praised 'em though i never felt they were actually good... i don't like rhyming anymore.

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BloodCold wrote on Jan 2nd, 2011 3:34pm

PCADriven wrote on Jan 2nd, 2011 at 8:36pm :
Random question.

Why do you have a problem with rhyming?

Where? When? How?

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PCADrivena wrote on Dec 16th, 2010 10:24am

BloodCold wrote on Dec 13th, 2010 at 1:43pm :
Interchangeable or not, i prefer 'bro' just cuz that way it's more clear that you are referring to a human and not a piece of cloth


cant I be referring to both? at the same time?

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BloodCold wrote on Dec 13th, 2010 7:43pm

Interchangeable or not, i prefer 'bro' just cuz that way it's more clear that you are referring to a human and not a piece of cloth :p

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BloodCold wrote on Dec 11th, 2010 8:38pm

PCADriven wrote on Dec 11th, 2010 at 12:26pm :
lmao i was jk bra i wasnt offended i was just being a doosch :P

It will take me ages to understand why using 'bra' in place of 'bro' is cool... but whatever. And i know you weren't offended but i still think that if you like a band and can't even get the name right it's just stupid :p

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BloodCold wrote on Dec 8th, 2010 4:32pm

PCADriven wrote on Dec 8th, 2010 at 10:42am :
Seeing as I'm the worlds biggest fall out boy fan, I thought I should telll you..

In your favorite bands section of your profile, it says "fall out boys". This is incorrect and offensive :P Naw but change it to "Fall Out Boy" =)

Cya brotholemuel!

It actually is pretty offensive, i agree. My mistake, should've given a once over after typing :cry:
Corrected. Thanks :)

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BloodCold wrote on Nov 23rd, 2010 10:06am

PCADriven wrote on Nov 23rd, 2010 at 10:03am :
I didnt mean to sound negative, your imagery was great. Just the thesis behind the poem seemed...too far fetched or underdeveloped. Maybe its just my stupidity :P

Nah, that's just me and my non existant skills as a writer :p Don't worry yourself :)
bye bye.

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BloodCold wrote on Nov 21st, 2010 4:47pm

Thnks for the crit :) I did feel like something was wrong... but i was not trying too hard i was just distracted and i didnt really work on any analogy, all i did was write thoughts of a person tired and somewhar detached from life.
I'll keep your criticisms in mind :)

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BloodCold wrote on Nov 19th, 2010 10:13am

he he i told ya i'm extreme ( :p: ) everyone else likes the piece :)

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BloodCold wrote on Nov 18th, 2010 6:59am

Critted your piece.Dont take it to heart, i'm extreme sometimes.

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skylerjames13 wrote on Nov 15th, 2010 4:05am

Hey man, I critted your piece. Mine giving mine a look?
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.ph p?p=25693720#post25693720

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BloodCold wrote on Oct 29th, 2010 12:03pm

I see you've posted the piece, I gave it a quick read and I like it :)
I'll post a detailed crit when I get time.

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BloodCold wrote on Oct 28th, 2010 6:44am

No problem,pm the poem and i'll try to give my best crit :)
WARNING : my crit's always suck...

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BloodCold wrote on Oct 25th, 2010 11:54am

The last piece you posted wasnt shit,the experiment was still worth it "Every small, little,innocent thing that's happening is making way for something gigantic" :p

Your new piece i'll crit sometime within next 24hrs :)

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BloodCold wrote on Oct 22nd, 2010 12:27pm

If you're busy you dont have to but i really want to know if this comes across as a love piece for a girl...
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.ph p?t=1373510

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BloodCold wrote on Oct 10th, 2010 9:57am

This because you didnt like my last piece...
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.ph p?t=1369682

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rocknrolldude43 wrote on Oct 9th, 2010 8:26pm

PCADriven wrote on Oct 9th, 2010 at 8:54am :
I call dibs on cassadee, sorry bud

Then again, all male HM fans do, right? :haha:

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BloodCold wrote on Oct 6th, 2010 12:44pm

Random Question:Two things you like and two you hate 'bout yourself?

Thnks for the crit on my piece:)

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