Well, it looks like I fucked up chapter 17 royally, by confusing the names of Benny (the high school girl from Guitargasm) with Carrie (the art chick from Our Man Evans). So basically long stretches of Gasm 17 make no sense, and all of the comments so far are like, who is who? What's with the names? So yeah, it's a mess.
I'll see if U-G can repost a corrected copy next week. Whatever. I'm working too hard at this shit, and even when I'm happy with the new posts, they're usually full of mistakes.
As always, I'll try and do better.
The good news? I'm meeting Ministry on Sunday. Expect to hear about that.
Yo man, you should get some people to proof read this stuff for you. I am sure you can find plenty of people dying to get a sneak peak at the next chapter .
honestly, because i had forgotten who Benny wan it still makes sense. But either way, I know that you have alot to do so with the stress and all the characters you've already made it's normal to get mixed up at SOME point
anyways, know matter how many mistakes, you are still an AWSOME writer.
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