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addicted2gtrs (2)
Friday, July 04, 2008

#1 (just something simple)

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This is just something I wrote, one of my most recent poems. Ok, maybe a couple months old but hey, I'm a songwritter, poems are slightly different. :haha:

 

NUMBER ONE

[1 CORINTHIANS 1:28]

IS WHAT I WANT WHAT I HAVE?
OR DO I WANT WHAT WILL NOT LAST?
THESE POSESSIONS JUST TELL MY TIME,
THE THINGS YOU LOVE IS WHAT GIVES ME LIFE.
AS I CHANGE MY HEART TO HONOR YOU MORE,
I BRING TO NOTHING THE OBSESSIONS I ADORE.
CAUSE IN YOU, I’M FINDING SO MUCH MORE.
LOVE, JOY, PEACE I DON’T DESERVE.
BUT WHEN YOU’RE THE ONLY THING I PUT FIRST,
MY HEART FEELS QUITE FUNNY, IT DOESN’T HURT.
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addicted2gtrs wrote on Jul 16th, 2008 4:29pm

Thats very good, its almost like it needs more added on to it to make it sound done...do u know what i mean?

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