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Wednesday, February 04, 2009

moss on my pillow

Current mood: contemplative

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Comments: 3

I finally found a place to rest my head

But it's strangely quiet

I must be dead

 

A little cold...

Tonight I won’t be so bold

This bedtime story has grown old

(How many times must I be told?)

 

It is still and silent

Remorse is futile

Who would have thought a mere feeling could be so violent?

 
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psquartsoff01 wrote on Feb 4th, 2009 7:39pm

well said...

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SGstriker wrote on Feb 6th, 2009 4:17am

This was really good. I really like the first 3 lines.

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jman6340 wrote on Jun 19th, 2009 7:28am

very good

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