I love the verse melodies, very peaceful, the chorus fits pretty well with the verse, the solo is pretty badass as well. I think you wrote this song very well, I'd like to help you improve it a little bit, it has some mixing issues, first is too much gain, if you back off the gain a tad, it might sound less muddy in the chorus, I don't know if your using a bass guitar or not, but if you aren't, you should, cause the guitars sound a bit too bassy, and really trebley at the same time, so run a high and low pass on your electric guitars, and have the bass guitar take up all the lows, 0 hz to 300 hz and that will give your tone a huge amount of punch and clarity. Also, double track that mofo.

I really like the song, I hope you take my advice, or some of it at least.

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Really nice man.....i love the verses man.....the rhythm really compliments the solo man...nice...btw, what did you use to do the drums?? Actual playin or software??

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