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hulkthebassist wrote on Mar 3rd, 2009 11:21pmKole* wrote on Mar 3rd, 2009 at 5:03pm :
Is it because the lyrics are too explicit or perhaps the music is a little to "heavy?" Why does he think it's not a good song to play at Church?
If this is the case, then it may still be a great song which you can play outside of the Church setting; so don't give up on that song.
Music wise, gospel/worship music uses this progression a lot: C, C#dim7, Dm, etc.
The chromatic diminished 7 chord is used very often in these musical styles...so you can choose to use it or not (depending on how "traditional" you want the music to sound).
Best of luck. |
no the music is awesome its the lyrics he says that it doesnt really talk about the title, how bout i do this type up the words i made and u can tell me how to change it
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hulkthebassist wrote on Mar 2nd, 2009 9:40pmKole* wrote on Mar 1st, 2009 at 10:12pm :
Sure, whats up? |
well i perform songs at my church with cousin so im trying to write a good worship song and ive written one already but my other cousin( who is a preacher) says that its not a really good song to play at church
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hulkthebassist wrote on Mar 2nd, 2009 3:09amhey kole thanks for u help on my last song now i need ur help for something esle quote |
Ikary wrote on Jan 22nd, 2009 2:57pmHi Kole
I just composed my first song, it's a 2-minute instrumental, and it's nothing really good, but since it's my first song I'd really appreciate it if you could give it a listen and tell me what you think (or how to make it better, hehe). I've been playing for 1 year and 9 months and I had only composed mini melodies of less than one minute before, and beginnings of songs I never finished. I had this acoustic guitar melody with a little guitar solo from the beginning of 2008, and today in around 5 hours I turned it into a song. Anyway, I didn't record it but I have an MP3 recorded of the sampled Guitar Pro sounds, so that's what I'll send you if you accept to give it a listen.
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hulkthebassist wrote on Jan 14th, 2009 3:06pmKole* wrote on Jan 14th, 2009 at 1:45am :
No problem. Actually, that contest is finished, but I'll be holding a new one soon. I'll let you know, so you can enter it in that one.
-Kole |
ok lol now all i have to do is deicide on which song to enter lol
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hulkthebassist wrote on Jan 12th, 2009 10:46pmKole* wrote on Jan 12th, 2009 at 2:27pm :
You're welcome and best of luck! |
thanks hey when im done will i be able to enter it into that songwriting contest thing or is it to late
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hulkthebassist wrote on Jan 5th, 2009 2:36amKole* wrote on Jan 4th, 2009 at 8:18pm :
Interesting concept. So I see the chorus as possibly being about many different things, but here are the two I would write about if it was my song.
1. Combine the female/male experience into one. Talk about "we" or "us" and how the breakup feeling is universal. At the end, you can sing your hook "Fishes in the sea" and it will apply to both genders.
2. The second thing I may do with the chorus, is to turn it into a stanza of hope. Perhaps the first few verses are about breaking up, but the chorus will be about how you lift your head up high from the experience and realize there are more "Fish in the sea". |
hmmm thanks now ill have to think how im gonna do that lol
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hulkthebassist wrote on Jan 2nd, 2009 2:27amKole* wrote on Jan 1st, 2009 at 2:10pm :
Having trouble w/ lyrics or music? If lyrics, what's the song about...if music, what key is it in and what was your previous chord progression? |
coming up with music im excellent at its the words for the chorus im having trouble with, and in one verse its about a boy getting dumped and the other verse a girl is getting dumped and its sorta a song to help ppl get out of their rut of getting dumped. So far its name is Fishes In The Sea and its in the key of E
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hulkthebassist wrote on Dec 31st, 2008 5:34pmKole* wrote on Dec 31st, 2008 at 1:35am :
Hey sorry for answering so late, I don't check my profile often and for some reason I didn't get notified via e-mail that anyone commented.
Anyway, if you would still like some help/advice just let me know. |
yeah im having some trouble coming up with a chorus for a song im writing
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karanggusi wrote on Oct 25th, 2008 12:55pmrate my new song pls
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hulkthebassist wrote on Oct 18th, 2008 4:34ami was wondering if u could help me get started on this song im trying to do quote |
Paul Tauterouff wrote on Sep 19th, 2008 1:48amSorry, I didn't realize you had sent me a request. I'm proud to be your friend Kole! quote |
Squall142 wrote on Aug 6th, 2008 6:09amKole* wrote on Aug 4th, 2008 at 6:46pm :
I did receive your song and thanks for entering the contest.
Best of luck!
-Kole |
Awesome!
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rocker_01 wrote on Aug 2nd, 2008 6:09amKole!
Just mailed in my contest entry - hope you'll crit it? 
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Squall142 wrote on Jul 25th, 2008 8:33pmJust sent my song in, I hope you like it! quote |
x-blondie-sare- wrote on Jul 22nd, 2008 9:30pmthanks for the critique of my song!!
i really appreciate it..
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strikeout_27 wrote on Jul 22nd, 2008 9:14pmI just sent you an e-mail with my music for the contest. Hope to hear from you soon. quote |
azwad wrote on Jul 20th, 2008 9:22amThanks for your critique of my songs.
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angus is god wrote on Jun 30th, 2008 5:27pmKole* wrote on Jun 30th, 2008 at 1:07am :
Yea I know what you mean. Bridges use to be a pretty big issue of mine...my next Songwriting Video may be on connecting different sections of music (or just the bridge section in general). |
Can't wait
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