Contacting HardcoreSpartan
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Wednesday, January 13, 2010


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Every step I take is another fall into a dark and ancient forest.
Logs, moss, and vines just waiting to stumble me.
Mist surrounding and clouding my path.
Shackling human mind from reality.
Bits and flecks of sunlight flash downward shrouded by trees.
Giving pieces of clarity but not the whole.
Creatures staring me down with contempt.
Guardians in their own domain.
Forbidding any form of comfort.
There's no end to this passage.
Only dimensions into eternity.

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JerseyGirl91 wrote on Jan 13th, 2010 3:28pm

very deep. nice allegory of the "creatures staring you down with contempt".


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