Still working away trying to get back into the flow of songwriting. As such I've just been working away pulling quick ideas together.
Here's something I wrote this afternoon, hope you enjoy it.
Nothing Ever Changes
I wish I could open up, the time thats passed, Like an open book, answers questions asked.
If i could just recall, how the ending goes A story stopped, in a plot thats froze
Pre-Chorus And my feet hurt, And my minds blank My eyes are getting heavy, Failing to keep steady
Chorus For I cant see...too far ahead. Seems to me....it starts again. And as the earth.... goes round the sun, we remember....Its the same for everyone.
...Nothing ever changes...
If i could embrace, who I think i see untie his ropes and set him free
Chorus I cant see...too far ahead. Seems to me....it starts again. And as the earth.... goes round the sun, we remember....Its the same for everyone.
Interlude x2 Been here...before Back where we started Go round...once more Nothing ever changes
I cant see...too far ahead. Seems to me....it starts again.
I like it, except the rhyming seems a little forced. I'd do a couple of revisions, especially in stanza II (Goes/froze). I really like the chorus, the last two lines in it are wonderful. On the whole, great song :-)
