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Tuesday, July 05, 2011

Nothing Ever Changes - Lyrics (1st Draft) - 5/7/11

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Still working away trying to get back into the flow of songwriting. As such I've just been working away pulling quick ideas together.

Here's something I wrote this afternoon, hope you enjoy it.

Nothing Ever Changes

I wish I could open up,
the time thats passed,
Like an open book,
answers questions asked.

If i could just recall,
how the ending goes
A story stopped,
in a plot thats froze

Pre-Chorus
And my feet hurt,
And my minds blank
My eyes are getting heavy,
Failing to keep steady

Chorus
For I cant see...too far ahead.
Seems to me....it starts again.
And as the earth.... goes round the sun,
we remember....Its the same for everyone.

...Nothing ever changes...

If i could embrace,
who I think i see
untie his ropes
and set him free

Chorus
I cant see...too far ahead.
Seems to me....it starts again.
And as the earth.... goes round the sun,
we remember....Its the same for everyone.

Interlude x2
Been here...before
Back where we started
Go round...once more
Nothing ever changes

I cant see...too far ahead.
Seems to me....it starts again.

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pielover375 wrote on Jul 11th, 2011 4:04pm

I like it, except the rhyming seems a little forced. I'd do a couple of revisions, especially in stanza II (Goes/froze). I really like the chorus, the last two lines in it are wonderful. On the whole, great song :-)

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