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Fearless(Times)a wrote on Jul 24th, 2009 11:56pm

thanks everyone. yeah I didn't really know what to do lol I did the whole lead in one take then just said eff sounds good for a first try

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ankthebank wrote on Jul 24th, 2009 6:01pm

Like previous listener, I like the arpeggiated chords at the start.

Try and experiment more with strumming rhythms to add more variety (when you record).
And try and fit in a few more varied chord sequences.

Seems like it could lead into a good song... just stick in proper instrument arrangements and it could be killer.

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stephen_rettie wrote on Jul 24th, 2009 5:26pm

I like the arpeggiated chords in the intro, after that it seemed like you ran out of ideas, and really just improvised on some chords. if you built on the intro and added a genuine melody to the chords afterwords i think this could be a cool song, but good effort and keep it up!

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