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311ZOSOVHJH wrote on Sep 2nd, 2012 6:47am

yeah............cool riff :cool:

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trashedlostfdup wrote on Dec 30th, 2011 7:20am

you have a good riff, but i really really really really think it is way too repetitive. nice little breakdown as somebody else stated. solo didn't go with it as good as it could have. i would maybe try recording it with a different lead, maybe be a little less repetitive rhythm.

definitely has solid potential, try mixing things around. i haven't been able to record for the last year and it is killing me. i get an interface and a mic and my computer isn't fast enough. all of the stuff on my profile is over a year old and recorded to my fiancee's iphone. lol. i am itching to find a way to get some new stuff up there.

anyways i am drunk and rambling. nice work. :cheers:

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robintiba wrote on Dec 19th, 2011 7:46pm

This was really good man! I like the groove. I would really like to hear it better recorded and with a vocalist.. It would be awesome!

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AJSaw wrote on Mar 21st, 2010 5:30am

Hey man. This is pretty good. Keep it up. I want more!

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THEandrew wrote on Jan 20th, 2010 12:07am

This song, is actually really really good man, KUDOS TO YOU!

the solo seems almost not to fit, but it works, and it's a hell of a lot better than anything I can doo

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acdclandon wrote on Jan 19th, 2010 3:13am

peacemaker898 wrote on Jan 17th, 2010 at 12:00am :
The quality isn't perfect, but it isn't that bad, either. Though, I'm not a big fan of the tone, it's a bit muddy, and not crunchy.

I like the riffs going on throughout, I can really hear some sweet Seether-esque vocals over it.

At some parts, where the verse or chorus repeat themselves, there is an unnatural sounding change into the repeat. I'm guessing it was just copied over, I recommend using fades or recording all the way through.

I liked the bridge, it reminded me of Zeppelin. The solo is really good, too. You're a really good guitarist for being 15, a lot better than me, at least, haha.

I liked it, but there's room for improvement, mostly when it comes to recording rather than the song itself. Keep it up!


I agree with this, although I would add that it's a little repetitive and could use some shortening. I like the solo definitely a cool part man. Also the breakdown-ish area at the end is very cool.

Nice job :)

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bobthebum16 wrote on Jan 18th, 2010 6:54pm

I liked it! Beginning sounded kinda mainstream but more to the middle it was more punk :) nice 4/5

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peacemaker898 wrote on Jan 18th, 2010 2:05pm

The quality isn't perfect, but it isn't that bad, either. Though, I'm not a big fan of the tone, it's a bit muddy, and not crunchy.

I like the riffs going on throughout, I can really hear some sweet Seether-esque vocals over it.

At some parts, where the verse or chorus repeat themselves, there is an unnatural sounding change into the repeat. I'm guessing it was just copied over, I recommend using fades or recording all the way through.

I liked the bridge, it reminded me of Zeppelin. The solo is really good, too. You're a really good guitarist for being 15, a lot better than me, at least, haha.

I liked it, but there's room for improvement, mostly when it comes to recording rather than the song itself. Keep it up!

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