Ok for my story stuff I'm jumping every where with parts to show you so please bare with me. And some times spelling sucks too. this is from the begining.
“Now Loretta play nice. You don't have to kill her.” Matt said as he held Loretta down. Loretta finally gave in and just sat there. Edward didn't looked to happy.
“If you guys don't stop fighting I'll kill you both myself.” Edward was yelling this and his eyes changed red as they do when he feeds. At hearing the yelling Rune came in. Another vampire but a little more quite and shy then the others. He walked over to Edward an whispered to him:
“You haven't told them yet have you?”
“No I'm starting to think I shouldn't.”
“You need them, there your allies'. They need to fight.”
“Ok fine get the rest of them I'm not going to repeat myself. As Rune left the room Edward turned to Loretta and Matt.
“Come see me in my room when we are done here.” Then he turned his back on them, stared into the fire.
  
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