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Tuesday, March 24, 2009

Disbelief. Interest Check

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Greetings readers and a big thank you for reading, as ever.

I'd like to guage your opinion on a potential little project of mine. Having read part fifteen you'll note that Paul and Ally don't really get things going. I'd like to know if any of you are saucy enough to be interested in reading an alternate version where there's no phone call.

It would be rated R, and therefore unsuitable for UG, so it would be distributed by e-mail. It also stands a chance of being quite long.

If I have enough people interested I'll begin to write it, then consider distribution. Depending on the length and quality of it, I may be charging up to £1 for the piece, or I may not if I don't think it's deserving of it.

I'd be glad to hear some opinions,
Tom Colohue

7:29 pm - 87 comments - 12 Kudos - Report!

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Nofx_69 wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 4:17pm

Count me in !

Nofx_69 wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 4:17pm

By the way, I really enjoy reading Disbelief... GREAT stuff !

HiyuKantaro wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 4:38pm

Nice! but I don't have a paypal or anything..

CG138 wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 4:46pm

Alright danielle steel, I'll bite. Although I'm not convinced charging for a piece of the puzzle is a completely solid idea. Maybe the finished product with the additions, but not a piece at a time. Just my two cents..... or my two p to you, I suppose.

iron_maiden93 wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 4:54pm

sure, i suppose, although i don't have any money to pay you with, euro's, or dollars

u.n.t.a.m.e.d. wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 4:54pm

HiyuKantaro wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 at 8:38am :

Nice! but I don't have a paypal or anything..

Me neither
And I'd want to read it!

Colohuea wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 5:04pm

CG, it's not a piece of the puzzle. It's an alternate version of part fifteen, with nudity.

As I've said, I might not be charging. I want it to be read, but I also want it to be worth the extra work.

Shayne777 wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 5:05pm

count me in disbelief is awesome

CG138 wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 5:10pm

Colohue, our support and undying loyalty for your work should be all the payment you need... HA, But really, we're all musicians, what makes you think we have a quid to spare? Though I suppose, you know, a man has to make some green somehow.

Noob_Cakes12 wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 5:26pm

Count me in on the alternate piece =) keep up the great work

Colohuea wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 5:36pm

Without some sort of payment I can't afford to live, and thus, work. :P

I'm glad to see so many people offering their opinions here. I'll begin work on a first draft.

Equivalence wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 5:38pm

I'd definitely read an alternate version...payment would be tricky though

therudycometh wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 5:46pm

Sure, count me in.... although I don't have any funds currently.... could you maybe pull a Trent Reznor?

dial-a-death wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 6:18pm

I'd like to read it, but have no way to pay.

Why charge for this one when the rest is posted free on Ultimate Guitar anyway?

And to be honest, while the thought of the alternate ending sounds good, I also think it would be interesting to find out why the phonecall is so important that she wants to kick Paul out of her room. My girlfriend's never done that, although she has asked me to keep quite while she's been on the phone a couple of times. Why couldn't Ally do that?

Ripping Corpse wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 6:42pm

i want it!

cpick2014 wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 6:43pm

id be cool with it but i dont think id pay for it. the great thing about the fiction on this site is that its all free. keep up the good work though.

Tatersalad1080 wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 6:43pm

I'd love to read it, and i'd most likely pay for it too but i dont have a way of giving you money

Hoodoo Child wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 6:52pm

i'd love to read it, but i have no way to pay

androidred0100 wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 6:59pm

i'm down, depending on how much that equates to US dollars.

Riot Act wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 7:15pm

I couldn't pay you for it, but I will continue to highly rate your columns. Disbelief is amazing. I would love an alternate version.

cukd7x-a2- wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 7:39pm

I probably wouldn't pay for it, but it is definitly something you should work with.

OsirisProtocol wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 7:40pm

I'd be up for it mate just cause your work is awesome.

xbonez182 wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 8:38pm

I'd be interested...Becoming a big fan of this series!

CG138 wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 9:06pm

Ally is a bitch and a tease. What kind of cruel woman brings you into the room and onto the bed with no intention of, pardon the rough analogy, getting your dick wet?

CrossBack7 wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 9:14pm

Surprisingly, I'm in a situation damn similar to this at the moment. It sucks. I'd read the extra bit, but I don't have a credit card to pay for it, eh. Great installment by the way, if a bit singularly focused.

Campbell22 wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 9:29pm

count me in

Jonny B0Y wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 9:51pm

im in

c-rob6422 wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 9:57pm

YES PLEASE
CRob2017@aim.com

MSFoSS wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 10:32pm

Count me in

gorkyporky wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 10:42pm

i all up for it, but honestly, i dont hink ill pay 1 pound for it, just because i dont have paypall or anything.

dmiwshicldply wrote on Mar 24th, 2009 10:52pm

i would love to read it but im not gonna pay man

Rocker_geek wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 12:07am

I would have liked to read it, but I can't pay, so....
Anyways, Good Luck

Pannenkoeken wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 12:21am

I think I'd be up for it more if you weren't using your weekly story to sell and distribute erotica. >.<

NearlyPrescient wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 12:37am

dirty.
I'm only interested because I dislike the idea of censorship.
>.<
or so I'll claim.

breakdown123 wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 1:27am

Haha erotica for sale? count me in. ill be selling my DS-1 pedal if we have to pay. so make it worth it XD

KiloJulietA wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 1:50am

Seeing that I was soooo sure that the ending wouldn't be the one it was in the uncensored part 15, please, count me in. Otherwise, Disbelief is coming along very well. Kudos!

Phoenix-Kun wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 3:09am

Count me in bro, I'm loving the story so far

Jango22 wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 3:59am

I'd attempt to pay for it, but 1. I dunno how much that is in USD, and 2. i doubt my parents would let me buy it >_> I'd be willing to edit it for free, though :P
Keep up the good work with the main story, though!

enselmis wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 4:59am

Hey, count me in man.

UG needs this kind of thing, or at least UG'ers do, spice it up a bit!

The_Raven wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 6:54am

Count me in man! Great idea Big fan of Disbelief

troubletcat wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 6:59am

I'd definately be interested, but I don't know if I'd want to pay, not because the writings not worth it but because it seems like a bit of a dodgy practice. I don't know that you can advertise on this site for that kind of thing, but it might be an ok idea to have a way for people who like your writing and want more to donate a few dollars, or to release some kind of larger package (all the installments+extras) when it's done, and charge for that.

Just don't like the idea of paying for little insular bits like that.

DesertEagle wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 9:51am

I'd Be Interested but im afraid i cant pay i dont have paypal etc and i think its a bit dodgy but yeh definitely interested

metal-head666 wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 10:30am

yeh id read it. i wouldnt mind finding what would happend between them had the phone call not happened. if you dont charge anyhting you can count me in dude

joseruntalan wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 10:34am

i wouldn't mind =( but i don't have paypal =(

joseruntalan wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 10:35am

oops sorry for double post but first smiley - =)

Colohuea wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 11:42am

Okay. The huge amount of interest has definitely confirmed the decision. I won't be charging for it.

When it's done I shall PM everybody here to send me an e-mail, the reply shall be the content. It won't be quick, I have a lot of duties to attend to and weekly Disbelief to continue, but it will happen.

Thanks, as always, for your continuing support, your comments and your ratings. The sheer amount of comments here is staggerring. Some of your names I've never seen rating or commenting, so it's nice to know you're all reading. I feel very honoured.

saladforkspear wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 2:25pm

Shit! Did I get here too late? Well anyway if I can get it, it'd be totally f**kin' awesome. By the way, Disbelief kicks ass! Looking forward to reading the next installment! =)

RockStAr2121 wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 2:30pm

I'd love to read it man!

fishfingaz wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 3:47pm

Could i get one of these?

cedbass wrote on Mar 25th, 2009 8:47pm

Yeah I'd totally be up for reading it. I wouldn't be able to pay because of no paypal. The story seems to be going great though! Thumbs up!

ikarian-pride wrote on Mar 26th, 2009 12:24am

if i had the money, i would absoluetly do it. hell, i'd pobably buy the entire series.
well, i dont, so i cant

oh, and you're a great writer. keep it up man. i cant wait for the rest of the series.

gander93 wrote on Mar 26th, 2009 1:19am

Definately. I wouldn't be able to pay either, but if you end up posting it for free let me know. Cheers!

prestothemc wrote on Mar 26th, 2009 1:52am

I'll read if you dont charge lol. I dont have paypal

wreck1819 wrote on Mar 26th, 2009 2:53am

id love a copy man, but as all colege students, broke..

buccoc wrote on Mar 26th, 2009 3:14am

i think that would be intrested in that, i too am broke tho

HerrMagnum wrote on Mar 26th, 2009 4:32am

if its free, sure. why not

zoso rld wrote on Mar 26th, 2009 5:50am

im in if its free

filthylittleboy wrote on Mar 26th, 2009 7:14am

rofl! i wish i could buy the whole fucking thing, both versions right now!

Tzeel wrote on Mar 26th, 2009 1:51pm

I'm in too, would even spare a dollar, if i had any means to transfer it..

ROCKASAURUS_SEX wrote on Mar 26th, 2009 6:42pm

im in. and im poor so

ibanezx wrote on Mar 27th, 2009 6:42pm

im in!

JackO'Lantern wrote on Mar 28th, 2009 3:04pm

i'd love to read it

cyborg_monkey wrote on Mar 29th, 2009 3:22am

so very in, as long as its free
keep up the good work

taste_the_pain wrote on Mar 30th, 2009 3:14am

I'm in too.

the_bradman wrote on Mar 30th, 2009 3:55am

This whole series is great and I would love to read the alternative.

Gmurcielago14 wrote on Apr 1st, 2009 12:17am

Ill take it!

hriday_hazarika wrote on Apr 1st, 2009 3:59pm

How about sending me a copy too? ^___^

Skater901 wrote on Apr 2nd, 2009 2:26pm

If it's free, sure, but I don't have any money to pay you for it. What little money I have goes on CD's.

gibsonpenguin wrote on Apr 3rd, 2009 8:12pm

Hey, if it's not too late, I'd definitely be interested, unfortunately as a poor college student, I wouldn't be able to purchase it.

Love the story so far, I'm excited to see it continue.

jimmypopali wrote on Apr 10th, 2009 7:53pm

Please count me in too! I love the story, but i really enjoy your special chapters even more!

ZZander20 wrote on Apr 11th, 2009 5:53am

I would like one of these as well. Keep up the great work!

hbk24 wrote on Apr 17th, 2009 2:53am

send it if it is free but if you charge don't bother and also keep the disbeliefs coming they are some great reads

slghtlystoopid wrote on Apr 22nd, 2009 2:55am

id like a copy!

SylvaShredder wrote on Apr 29th, 2009 1:54pm

I would also like a copy

SaintsofNowhere wrote on May 1st, 2009 8:19pm

ooh ooh! Send it to me! E-mail is on my profile.

But isn't the call important if she kicked him out for it???

Seth Shadows wrote on May 6th, 2009 10:44pm

mine

gorkyporky wrote on May 8th, 2009 3:23pm

is this still on? Cause if it is, id like a copy.

Peres.T.Peanut wrote on Jun 17th, 2009 1:48am

count me in, im really interested.

Acid_Rainmaker wrote on Jun 26th, 2009 6:14pm

Im definetly interested in reading that but not about having to pay for it.

jbswreckfest wrote on Jul 1st, 2009 5:02pm

i want this. love disbelief

tome567 wrote on Jul 1st, 2009 6:48pm

ill take it

RockHerJ33zer wrote on Jul 1st, 2009 8:24pm

Sure, I'll take one too, sounds interesting. Keep on writing brotha.

FallenSaint wrote on Jul 1st, 2009 9:31pm

I'll check it out

great work man

Rythym Guitar wrote on Jul 1st, 2009 11:18pm

I'll take it

Rythym Guitar wrote on Jul 1st, 2009 11:20pm

I'm sorry not repost again but just asking are you still sending it out? If you are i'd definately like a copy

LiveWire89 wrote on Jul 2nd, 2009 7:16pm

sounds awesome

coon117 wrote on Jul 12th, 2009 1:56am

Sounds good, I'll take one.

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