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Ardie12 wrote on Apr 28th, 2008 2:33amChordProgressiv wrote on Apr 27th, 2008 at 9:25pm :
You gotta work on those transitions between rough and soft guitar, they're very abrubt. The lyrics are a bit juvenile, you should spend more time thinking about em. The guitar tone's ok and your singing's not bad though. Needs a lot of work though, it's very disjointed.
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Thanks for the crit, i really didnt know how to get a good transition for it. i was going to crit your song earlier and i listened to it but i got distacted for some reason. but i just listened to it again and it sounds great the chord progression sounded good and your voice fit very well, i also really liked the female voice in the backround it is a good tune
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skagitup wrote on Apr 25th, 2008 11:51pmhey man. i thought you sounded a little like buckley in "flesh" and then noticed you'd done a hallelujah cover as well.
great stuff man, flesh is beautifully melodic. quote |
Spamwise wrote on Apr 20th, 2008 4:52pmI was talking about Hallelujah, actually haha. I've never been to Dublin, or Ireland for that matter. I would really like to go someday though. quote |
Spamwise wrote on Feb 25th, 2008 5:57pmthe link you posted in my topic didn't work, so i'll just crit you here. you have a great voice. it's a great song to listen to. I could definitely see myself listening to this in the future. This is a cover, right? Because I definitely know I've heard the chorus before.. quote |
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