Ah, that one! I agree.

Well, I rerecorded the solo part later, but I didn't change it - it sounded just the same way except the sloppy bend in the end which spoiled the first version

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I meant the very end, around 1:26. Prior to that it is fine.

Recorded after 6 months of playing? Pretty impressive.

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Hey, thanks! At the time this piece was recorded I had been playing guitar for something like 6 month and owned a Roland cube30 with a chineese Epiphone LP (yuck), the leads were rerecorded later on my greco, but through Guitar Rig.

Basically this thing is about a moment when you fall asleep and get a feeling of some light dreams leaking to half-dim reality... or something like that :P so I don't see why the ending deasn't fit.

Anyway, now (about 3.5 years later) I'm reintroducing the sing into my band (a duo actually) so it can become a song soon

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Not what I'd expect when I look at your influences. It has a bit of a post-rock feel to it, not that I'm a post-rock expect but that's what it sounds like to me.

Nice and relaxing. Playing wasn't perfect, and tone could be better. I like the leads that come in at the B section. I love anything with delay. I can't really pick between 4 or 5 stars. Change the ending, it ruins the whole mood of the piece for me personally. I will give you 5 though because it really is a nice piece.

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