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Saturday, March 21, 2009

Poem I wrote

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Here's a poem I wrote about 6 months ago. Tell me what you think. Its a very sad poem but I pretty sad when I wrote


Betrayal lingers in this air tonight

Like poison, a shadow creeps in my veins

Lurking, waiting, praying for the end

My body, my heart can't take much more

Awakened at last my mind unfolds

Blood in the heat of passion now grown cold

Bitter and useless my soul leaves me

The empty shell outside

The shell of a man

The man it used to be

Gone, and long forgotten

I lay here, on this cold bed of hate

Knife in one hand, life in the other

You can save me

Just reach, I'm right here hoping, praying, waiting

For your embrace

Your love

That I know will never come

I'd appologize, but it matters not

I think I'd rather stay... forgot

I think I'd rather just stay.... forgot

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Rock*life*away* wrote on May 8th, 2009 2:56pm

wow. thats really beautiful. I know its kind of weird to say that, but I really liked it.

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