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Wednesday, March 24, 2010

A Face Unknown

Current mood: sad

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Comments: 2

Sitting all alone

A face so unknown

Walking by all alone

A feeling I forgot I've known

Tell myself

"Leave the Face alone"

 

The Face standing all alone

Looks at a Face so unknown

Running by all alone

A feeling the face has not known

The Face tells herself

"..." 

 

The Face and I sitting alone

Glance at each other but unknown

Then a sad feeling; The Face is alone

Sitting next to a face unknown

Think to myself

"Can't let Her be alone"

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RG5EX1 wrote on Mar 24th, 2010 11:39am

Rhyming -known and alone over and over again get's repetitive after the first few lines. If you're thinking of using these as lyrics, I would suggest some changes.

Just my $.02

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1LPfana wrote on Mar 24th, 2010 7:33pm

lol definatly not lyrics just somethoughts i had to put on paper..or watever

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