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Monday, August 11, 2008

i wrote a short novel....i want your comments

Current mood: cynical

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 the family was in the emergency room, waiting to hear what had happened to their 13 year old daughter.  Earlier that night, Jenny had gone out with her friends, or atleast that is what she told her parents. Instead she went to go meet with her 17 year old boyfriend Alex.
 
 she had called him that night to tell him that she really needed to tell him something important.  When they went out, the romantic date turned into screaming and cursing and crying.  Alex got so enraged that he made Jenny walk all the way home.
 
 on the way back, a drunk driver struck Jenny from behind and sent her flying into the middle of the road.  The driver just sped off and left Jenny helpless and alone.
 
 that is how the family ended up in the ER in the first place.  Alex was hiding off in a corner of the hospital as well.  As soon as the doctor came out he was swarmed by the family. He had a sad look on his face as he told the family the news.
 
 "there was nothing that i could do to save your daughter or her baby."  Silence was immenent, and all eyes glared to Alex.
 
 
 
THAT IS JUST A SMALL PREVIEW OF A NEW BOOK THAT I AM TRYING TO WRITE. PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK.
 
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Punk_Savage wrote on Aug 11th, 2008 11:28pm

Bitchen!

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Xunluckyx13 wrote on Oct 18th, 2008 3:22am

WOW! thats awesome.

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croat_guitar wrote on Nov 3rd, 2008 9:36pm

keep up the good work

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esyrnyk wrote on Jan 21st, 2009 11:29pm

Nice!

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Eddie4President wrote on Mar 3rd, 2009 12:26am

poor alex.

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